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WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

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WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby lolinekocchi » Sun Mar 29, 2009 10:06 am

[logo coming soon] Lovely Days With You, A VN by LoliNekocchi.

Lovely Days with You Demo----> http://www.box.net/shared/st2y9gelth

Credits:
http://khmix.sakura.ne.jp/download.shtml for the chara maker and http://narup.if.land.to/sr_data_u.cgi?a ... g&mynum=69 for chara maker additional sets.
http://skimlines.deviantart.com/ for the character set 'Wendy' that I used here.
http://masato.ciao.jp/haikei/furemu.html and http://shass.sakura.ne.jp for the backgrounds
http://www.tam-music.com/ for BGMs
Creators of many anime-manga parodied here, I hope they wouldn't kill me.

Summary: You're a new guy in a so-called-universal-new town. You encounter various girls with various backgrounds.....

Shortly, it's a VN with 5 routes of 5 girls. Each route contains totally different story; some are full of parodies and LOLs, some can be full of Key-like tragedy.

Characters:

The Protagonist: You name him. Is an anime fan but not too hardcore. Personality can depends on which route taken....Age 16.
(The default name for him is...My old OC. It's weird, I know.)

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Na-chan
Her full name is unknown to the protagonist (The other knows her real name but won't tell it). But he calls her Na-chan. Is a lolicon PLUS shotacon. Likes both 2D and 3D lolis and shotas. She is an otaku too, and have fondness for APH*t*lia and L**cky S**r *you must know what animes are them* probably for the shota bishies and loli cuties. Age 16.

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Mirien (aka Miri)
Miri is very caring about Mia, her sister. She is pretty harsh and not so popular in her school. A bit of tsundere and kuudere, is strong and smart but not good at science. Age 16.

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Mialina (aka Mia)
Mia is Miri's little sister. Loves cute things (she wears nekomimi and meido outfit because she said it was cute) and was doing a part-time job in the protagonist's school canteen. Why she doesn't go to school will be later revealed....Age 13.

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Nekomi Chisa (Chisa)
Chisa is Saza's neighbor. Likes the protagonist since first sight. Cute and lovely but no one knows there's blood in her mind until....*censored for spoilers* Age 13.
(note: she is one of the chara in my light novel that I delayed! and she also my first RP chara on ASRPF)

*I'm using 'Wendy' by Mikan for this char*
Saza *weird name, yeah*
A girl who is the protagonist's childhood friend. Chisa's neighbor. Is a nice person but dislike cartoons, animes, mangas and comics for some reason. Age 16.

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Yay I made a game~ But it's not that nice, ahaha. So many grammatical error, please do not mind; I'm not from an English-speaking country. No hard critique, I'm still a newbie at making Visual Novels.
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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby 12riven » Sun Mar 29, 2009 10:27 am

I actually like the title :) It sounds like a real vn title to me ^^

i like your characters as well :) looking forward to this game.

also, do u hav screenshots? id like to see sum ^^
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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby Taishi » Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:08 pm

K played it =)

Overall its nice =)
but:

1. typos - i know evryone does them =) but alot of times it seams like player refers to himself as "IT"
2. In my opinion the text is bit too large... not that its a bad thing but you could scale it down a bit
3. the chars - not sure if you did it on purpose but using 3 diffrent type of chars (2 generators and one build in) does not look the best =P

and beside that... i love how you made that game so small =P guess midi files do wonders =P

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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby lolinekocchi » Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:10 pm

yeah, thanks for the critique ^^ I'll edit soon the errors ^^

Well, I can't draw nicely so I use character maker x3
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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby zero00 » Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:10 am

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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby lolinekocchi » Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:02 am

Thanks for the critique! *bows*

About the grammar, I think I'll correct it later.

The story is fast because I want this to be a short game......I'll edit later maybe.

The actual game's font is minimized already.

But I have delayed or maybe I will drop this project due to this reasons:
-I have encounter a writer block at a serious part of the game.
-My Novelty encounter some error and bugs, I'll report them later. Maybe I'll just wait patiently for the new version......
-I am busy with school, national test is only one month away.
-There are some stories I would like to turn into visual novel more than this one. There are two stories in my mind; and (The last one; I will make it in Indonesian)

Reason 2 is the one who really appeals....So the delaying of this VN will be long :oops:

*excuse my bad grammar*
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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

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Re: WIP: Lovely Days With You (bad title, I'm out of idea)

Postby Anome-chan » Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:32 am

I totally love the basis of this game (anime~!) and the images that you have up are cool looking ^^ But when I downloaded the demo and tried it, a problem that I reported in the bug thread happened: I couldn't see the characters or the border! :( They were simply boxes of white T^T
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