So~ , What do you guys think of my cover?

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So~ , What do you guys think of my cover?

Postby Hanyuu_Furude » Fri May 04, 2012 11:54 pm

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This is the Cover for my first Novel add-on. The -Harassment Exposing- Chapter.
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Re: So~ , What do you guys think of my cover?

Postby fleet » Sat May 05, 2012 2:47 am

The red text "Uchu no Saku Yori Ni" is difficult to read. You might want to go with a white font.
I'm sure other members here will have more useful comments.
I wish you success with your project.
Why? I like big ones, that's why.
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Re: So~ , What do you guys think of my cover?

Postby Berwald » Sat May 05, 2012 11:47 am

No problems with the text itself and the background is alright. It's the character that I will be commenting on. She has sausage arms and legs. xD So, you should work on that.

Her breasts are placed way too far up on her chest.

Her head is a bit big for the rest of her body. Either: widen her body or make her head (and hair) smaller.

Good luck! :mrgreen:
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