Mistaken Identity [demo, beta]

[shande]

Hello everyone. I'd like to share my novel with you. It's only one chapter long.
I want all your doubts and credits. If there's something you don't like or you would change, let me know.

So far I've found four "bugs".
1) bgm volumes up to 100% for a short time when fading
2) load game doesn't load the background that was changed a few lines before
3) the title screen is screwed if you don't have the Juice ITC font
4) the application stops and you can't do anything if you try to close it using other way than "end novel"

Test and comment please! Thanks in advance, cheers!

The link:

[fleet]

I'll send my comments in a private message.