Hello everyone, this is my first VN ever. Please leave some tips, feedback and so on. :3
DL:http://www.mediafire.com/?7stazqyanzidk70
Credit goes to Natsume Inc and Mar Intertainment for Rune Factory. I do not own the music nor Novelty.
A Love Found: A OS VN
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A Love Found: A OS VN
by Furude Reina-san » Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:13 pm
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Re: A Love Found: A OS VN
by fleet » Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:24 pm
Last edited by fleet on Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Why? I like big ones, that's why.
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Re: A Love Found: A OS VN
by odairedez » Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:44 pm
I finish playing. That's a nice story!!! =D
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Re: A Love Found: A OS VN
by Wright » Sun Feb 12, 2012 3:13 pm
After playing the game, I understood that you made this only to learn the programming.
But there really wasn't any need to release it.
There wasn't anything in the story. The grammar was bad too.
It was simple as this:
"A boy was invited to a date by a girl. They spent the day together. And at last, both confessed their love. End of story."
You could have made it better if you put the details like what happened on the date.
You should put more information. That way, the story will be much better.
I wish you luck on your future projects.
But there really wasn't any need to release it.
There wasn't anything in the story. The grammar was bad too.
It was simple as this:
"A boy was invited to a date by a girl. They spent the day together. And at last, both confessed their love. End of story."
You could have made it better if you put the details like what happened on the date.
You should put more information. That way, the story will be much better.
I wish you luck on your future projects.
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