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They were only... And all that is left...

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They were only... And all that is left...

Postby Sil » Mon May 06, 2013 6:46 pm

Hi guys,

I'm new here. I came across Novelty some time ago and decided to try it.
So I made this little project.

They were only... And all that is left...

You wake up in a room with another person. You have never seen it before. Nor the person who woke you.
You don't know how you got there. The last thing you remember is something knocking you unconscious.
So you try to get out.
But ofcourse, the door is locked.
So you work together to find a way out.

But ofcourse, You don't know who locked you up.
Is it a stranger?
Is it someone you know?
Or does the person who is closest to you now know more than she tells you?...

http://www.mediafire.com/?od1342n3946x592

That's basically the story.
I made 5 diffent endings which all can give answers or raise questions within the story.
I have let a few people play it and depending on how many endings they tried to get, it took them 15 to 45 minutes. It's not that long.
But our main language is not english so I guess that makes it a a bit longer for them.
Making this took me... about 30 hours. Including writing and making music.
All the music you hear is made by me, using Guitar Pro 5.
The sound effects, excluding gunshots, are from grsites.com and freesound.org.

Well, please see if you enjoy it.
Sil
 
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Re: They were only... And all that is left...

Postby 8oni » Tue May 07, 2013 2:38 pm

First, welcome to forum :D

And now for the critique

1. I'm sure someone else will say this but you need to check your grammar. I noticed some mistake and I'm not even speaking English.
2. I like your music! You make it yourself? You have talent :)
3.

As horror fans, I have to say I like your story. Will you make another one? :)
So many idea, so little time
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Re: They were only... And all that is left...

Postby Sil » Wed May 08, 2013 10:26 pm

Hey. thanks for your critique.
As for your question:



I'm glad you enjoyed it and even got all the endings. :D
And yes, I plan to make more of those kind of visual novels.
Right now, I am working on a 5 minute piece that will only contain a conversation between 2 people.
But after that I'll start working on another suspense story. A bit longer than this one.
And with more horror elements but still psychological.
Sil
 
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