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Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:03 pm
by EriksBlue
You play Jack Moon also called Yorim. He has moved to a new town with his uncle after the death of his father, and that is where our story begins.
*There has been a major script update*

-Note: This has some Shonen-ai elements.
-Note: There are 4 endings.

Can be found here: http://rpgmaker.net/games/3460/ go here for version 5.8.
This project time line is 9/14/2011 - 10/07/2011 (This was the time it took for me to do this project, of course the concept script was done before this).

Please leave feedback!

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:55 am
by Wright
I downloaded the game but how am I supposed to play it?
It isn't a Novelty file, but an unknown file.
Am I supposed to have some special software to play this game?

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:43 pm
by fleet
@Wright,
I downloaded the game, it is written in Novelty and it plays just fine on my PC. Did it create a log.txt file? If so, it would be helpful to know the contents of the file.

@eriksblue,

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:51 am
by Wright
Forget what I said earlier.
The game worked. The problem was the computer in which I downloaded the game couldn't recognize the zip file.
And here is my feedback, and I am being brutally honest.

Story... Didn't complete the game because of poor grammar.
Character art... Cute.
Background art... Not bad.
Music... Good.
Spelling and Grammar... Horrible.
Sound effects... Annoying.

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:05 am
by EriksBlue
Thank you for the feedback and I am sorry for the grammer and spelling errors (they will be fixed).

-I am doing a updated version.
-Were the sound effect to loud or should I get rid of them?
-I added my own icon so if that is what you mean by a unknown file.
-I'm sorry thank you for your patience.

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:55 pm
by Wright

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:00 pm
by Avaible
It wasn't meant to be an excuse, he just thanked you for putting up with his writing, even though it is not his first language, knowing that he's not perfect at it. No need to to be so repulsive (in case you didn't notice, you come off as it again).

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:43 pm
by EriksBlue
I'm not trying to use it as a excuse, I know I need to improve, I have just recetly bought the elements of style because my father said it would help.

About my VN. . .

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:22 am
by Wright

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:38 pm
by ErikB

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:49 am
by Wright

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:07 am
by Crusher

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 2:47 pm
by ErikB
Wright just earned himself a 7 day ban for being childish and disrespectful.

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 3:02 pm
by Avaible
I can approve of that. Sorry, EriksBlue, for derailing your thread.

Re: Torn Apart: Over the Net; Kay [Complete]

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:19 pm
by EriksBlue
It's alright you don't need too apologize.