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Please help/opinions!

Postby Kalyfe » Thu Apr 18, 2013 2:43 am

I made a website for the VN I started, called Dead Chivalry.
So, I haven't put all too much on here, but I have some of the basic plot and characters, as well as questions. If ya got five minutes or so to look at it and respond, it would be a huge help! Thanks!

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Re: Please help/opinions!

Postby fleet » Thu Apr 18, 2013 5:24 am

Why not just post the information here?
Why? I like big ones, that's why.
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Re: Please help/opinions!

Postby VNsomniac » Thu Apr 18, 2013 10:27 pm

Maybe be a bit more in depth about the character descriptions.
I think you should format the page so it's easier to read too.

Give the chip a name, a set material it's made from,
describe how it's supposed to work as opposed to only what it does.
You don't have to be scientifically correct, just thorough.
Write a more in depth history of your world.
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