by fatedpaths » Tue May 11, 2010 11:59 am
Lacking of tones... add more of them, fix the tatoo on the left cheek... it looks too 2d like u paste last minute to the drawing... the "yin&yang" symbol looks like it isnt part of the skin rather a something attached to it with a light... no shadow either... the clothes looks tight but amazingly the breast part wasnt affected... the silver bracelet need more shine to it since the char skin looks fleshed out ... light source-wise... from the bg it looks abit darker than room light... maybe u can adjust it to the char well...