Novelty forum

Hello~ Found this program a few days ago and just about died of happiness ;u; tried making a visual novel before with no luck as I couldn't really stick to learning coding
Been working on art for an idea Ive had and was hoping for some feedback~? And also sorry for not searching thoroughly myself but I noticed how some people had the facial expressions on one image along with the character and just used the state drop box to change the expression? Sorry if that makes no sense but if anyone manages to understand what I mean could you possibly explain how to do that D:? Thank you!
Here's the first image I made no matter how much I look at it I just can't really see it being in a visual novel...idk what it is but it feels off opinions would be loved regarding this! Thank you very much <3

Ahh I wasn't looking very well~ Sorry ;~; I found the answer to the expression related question. As to what would make the image more otome game like I would still love some answers <3

Welcome to the forums. Your drawing looks better than the art in some visual novels.
I'm not an artist, but you might want to shorten his neck.